Tuesday, October 25, 2011

Intro Paragraph: First Sentence....and Thesis.

Post your "rough" introductory paragraph.  EXCEPT - online post your opening "hook" first sentence, and then your Thesis Statement.


ex.   In 1885 the New York Highlanders, destined to become the New York Yankees, won their first World Series title with only ten players and an old mangy dog as a mascot.    >>>>>    It is clear that the Yankees have become the most successful baseball franchise in history because they have continually invested in player development and never except failure as an option, despite constantly being harassed by far lesser baseball clubs like the Boston Red Sox.

23 comments:

  1. Every two weeks a language will die but a language will never be born.

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  2. Every two weeks a langauge dies, but religion never dies.

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  3. Religion is a significant part of every culture in the world..........Religion is the most powerful form of culture expression because people of the same faith my speak many languages.

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  4. Language was created to be used, and religion was made for different beliefs. >>>>> Language, not religion, is the stronges form of cultural expression because language is used all the time and religion is not.

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  5. Religion is an important factor of a culture. >>>> Religion, not language, is the strongest way of cultural expression because people are willing to fight for their beliefs, language changes while religion does not, and a religion never dies.

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  6. Everyone speaks a language; however, not everyone practices a religion. >>>> Language not religion is the strongest form of cultural religion because you can speak what you believe and or feel.

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  7. Cultural expression is the way a culture demonstrates their beliefs and their values. >>>>> Language, not religion, is the strongest form of cultural expression because cultures use language to form thoughts and religious beliefs, language is the way people communicate, and it is used for expressing what they love and value.

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  8. Christianity is the number 1 religion practiced in the world

    Thesis: religion is the strongest culture expression because it never dies and more and more people can join into a religion.

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  9. language, not religion, is the strongest form of cultural expression because you can tell where people are from or what they study.>>>>> if language wasn't important to people then people could not

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  10. Language, not religion, is the stongest form of cultural expression, because it helps build unity and it lets us communicate.>>>>> If we din't have language we would not be able to talk to each other and communicate.

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  11. Belief, faith, hope. These are all words that describe religion. >>>>> Religion is a more significant because the belief system is worth dying for, there is less change, and a person can have multiple languages.

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  12. Everyone speaks a language; however, not everyone practices a religion. >>>> Language, not religion, is the strongest form of cultural expression because you can speak what you believe and or feel.

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